I´m going to tell you the story:
John is a producer television who has a beatiful family.. his wife Rachel, his son Patrick and he has a assistant Jenny.
His life was wonderful He got along with his family but suddenly it's breaking up and in a moment he think that his family look like a dream , but nothing is real.Then he tell that at his assistant to investigate and they went out to some place to look for help, some information. And they found a man, a police, who tell them that on the street, near to the ville, lived a ghost, a woman in white and he think that woman is his wife but he discovers that his wife, his son and his life are reals.
John is a producer television who has a beatiful family.. his wife Rachel, his son Patrick and he has a assistant Jenny.
His life was wonderful He got along with his family but suddenly it's breaking up and in a moment he think that his family look like a dream , but nothing is real.Then he tell that at his assistant to investigate and they went out to some place to look for help, some information. And they found a man, a police, who tell them that on the street, near to the ville, lived a ghost, a woman in white and he think that woman is his wife but he discovers that his wife, his son and his life are reals.
good work!
ResponderEliminarbut don't forget capitalize the first word before periods are very important.
but in general good work
Edelsy the verb in third person finish with S.
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